Sydney's Speech and Analysis

Sydney's Speech

Thank you, ladies and gentlemen, I am Sydney. I am here coming for the college, I am here coming for the rights of a student need to keep.

Now, it is not a secret that the tuition is too high. The tuition rises every year, at the same time, the cost of living also increasing. It is becoming more difficult for students to pay tuition and therefore earn degree.

And more than 36 million Americans have accumulated student debt; it also shows that the tuition is too high. The government needs to do something for students.

However, while many people can’t afford a college degree, it is becoming more difficult to find a job. With job cuts and layoffs, it is almost necessary to have a degree to get a job a step higher than flipping burgers. It is also a cause of the rise of unemployment rate.

Knowledge is power. It is a really important power a country needs to have. With a high tuition, students lost chance to go to college to learn knowledge.

The government needs to set up policy to solve the problem!

ANALYSIS

In the speech about college tuition fee, I tried to let the audience have the same feeling with me. This problem not just needs to be discussed by people; it is needs to be exactly finding a way to solve. I said that “I am here coming for the college tuition, I am here coming for the rights of a students need to have”. This sentence is in the beginning of the speech, the reason that I put this sentence there was to let the audience have a clear idea about the main idea of this speech. After the audience has an idea about the speech, they might have the same feeling with the orator; they might be interested with the speech. 

Secondly, I used a data to show the situation students are in. it is a way to show the information directly. “More than 36 million Americans have accumulated student debt”. The huge number can let people realize the serious level that students are facing. And at the end “government needs to set up policy to solve the problem”. This is kind of a call; it might encourage people to support for this problem.